Wednesday, February 12, 2014

AT THE FARM!!

AT THE FARM!!!
I arrive at the farm and I could hear the sausages on the b.q.q sizzling I could hear the dog barking. I could hear my dad shouting, “Ella, Ella!” I saw the water in the river flowing fast. I saw my cousin running in the long grass. I heard the cows mooing and sheep baaing. I heard the glass brake. I wonder if the ambulance was going to come. I wonder if he need to go to the hospital.

2 comments:

  1. Wow Ella!! I like the words in your story to make it inserting
    Wow done keep up the great work.

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  2. Great Ella i like it its fantastic

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